Seeyoucide, eh? It could well be a Joycean neologism. PS: Don't get too close to the boogers!
I re-Joyce.... at the comparison.Who're the boogers?
dont like the image too much, trust me, my room's walls look like that so not impressed king,but the poem, aah now that was nice, but seems incompletecan u build on that ?
Umm... that the 'feel' rag's talkin bout is probably the staccato imagery... wot's ur take??
Rags u shud put ur walls up on display... they must look very cool... er, at least, from my PoV!!Seeyoucide is a sort of epitaph... the dead and those visiting 'em have short attention spans, u see ;)