Urinalia


Ceramic, wide
big-mouthed
thin-throated
tongue-less,
sticking out
of a wall
like a tongue.

Doing a manly
something,
drinking
vile, fermented
liquids of
various makes
and vintage.

Helping out what
in the mammalian
world is done
around trees and
other standing
objects for marking
space and territory.

Comments

  1. very original choice of topic!
    interesting too!
    lol

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  2. Hehehe... Just felt like raising a stink!! :-)

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  3. Very nicely done, you know. (Well, I'm sure you do know!)

    The first stanza is really impressive.

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  4. Thanks River. I don't actually know... I often have very mixed feelings towards a new-born poem!! So really many thanks!!:-)

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  5. Thanks Dilliwali Kay! Ur pictures and captions are amazing. Good work!!

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  6. Is it a tribute to your talent that I read and squirmed :).

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  7. Er.. thanks. Guess, it's also to your imagination Mikra!!

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  8. When your writing conjures up images, then you way up to the top.

    The images and stink are indescribable!

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  9. Thanks Gautami, U got some hot stuff there too. Especially liked 'Passion'.

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  10. LOL, very charming...sing it away...

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